From d6294efbec2884b26c3cbbbe59476a7665aad267 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
Date: Thu, 6 Jan 2005 01:49:24 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] More minor updates and copy-editing.
---
doc/src/sgml/cvs.sgml | 8 ++++----
doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml | 6 ++++--
doc/src/sgml/release.sgml | 14 +++++++-------
3 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/cvs.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/cvs.sgml
index d29b58cb557..df2245e1fcd 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/cvs.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/cvs.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<!--
-$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/cvs.sgml,v 1.29 2004/12/02 04:12:12 neilc Exp $
+$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/cvs.sgml,v 1.30 2005/01/06 01:49:22 tgl Exp $
-->
<appendix id="cvs">
@@ -227,8 +227,8 @@ $ cvs checkout -r REL6_4 tc
<note>
<para>
- For creating a release branch, other then a
- -b option added to the command, it's the same thing.</para>
+ For creating a release branch, other than a
+ <literal>-b</> option added to the command, it's the same thing.</para>
</note>
</para>
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ cvs commit
<para>
Two directory areas are required for <productname>CVSup</productname>
- to do it's job: a local <productname>CVS</productname> repository
+ to do its job: a local <productname>CVS</productname> repository
(or simply a directory area if you are fetching a snapshot rather
than a repository; see below)
and a local <productname>CVSup</productname> bookkeeping
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml
index 1df05a8b6bd..ad556d01516 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml,v 1.11 2004/11/27 21:27:06 petere Exp $ -->
+<!-- $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/errcodes.sgml,v 1.12 2005/01/06 01:49:24 tgl Exp $ -->
<appendix id="errcodes-appendix">
<title><productname>PostgreSQL</productname> Error Codes</title>
@@ -46,7 +46,9 @@
same as the phrase shown in the table, with underscores substituted
for spaces. For example, code <literal>22012</>, DIVISION BY ZERO,
has condition name <literal>DIVISION_BY_ZERO</>. Condition names can
- be written in either upper or lower case.
+ be written in either upper or lower case. (Note that
+ <application>PL/pgSQL</> does not recognize warning, as opposed to error,
+ condition names; those are classes 00, 01, and 02.)
</para>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
index 4240149cea2..fe77a978b8c 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<!--
-$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.316 2004/12/13 18:05:08 petere Exp $
+$PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.317 2005/01/06 01:49:24 tgl Exp $
-->
<appendix id="release">
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.316 2004/12/13 18:05:08 petere
<note>
<title>Release date</title>
- <simpara>2004-??-??, current as of 2004-11-21</simpara>
+ <simpara>2005-??-??, current as of 2004-11-21</simpara>
</note>
<sect2>
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.316 2004/12/13 18:05:08 petere
Previous releases required the Unix emulation toolkit
<productname>Cygwin</> in order to run the server on Windows
operating systems. <productname>PostgreSQL</productname> has
- always supported clients on Windows.
+ supported native clients on Windows for many years.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.316 2004/12/13 18:05:08 petere
<listitem>
<para>
The arithmetic operators associated with the single-byte
- <type>"char"</> data type has been removed.
+ <type>"char"</> data type have been removed.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -312,8 +312,8 @@ $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.316 2004/12/13 18:05:08 petere
<para> The JDBC client interface has been removed from the core
distribution, and is now hosted at <ulink url=
"http://jdbc.postgresql.org">http://jdbc.postgresql.org</ulink>.
- The TCL client interface has also been removed. There are several
- TCL interfaces now hosted at <ulink url=
+ The Tcl client interface has also been removed. There are several
+ Tcl interfaces now hosted at <ulink url=
"http://gborg.postgresql.org">http://gborg.postgresql.org</ulink>.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -922,7 +922,7 @@ $PostgreSQL: pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.316 2004/12/13 18:05:08 petere
Make <literal>CASE val WHEN compval1 THEN ...</> evaluate <literal>val</> only once (Tom)
</para>
<para>
- <option>CASE</> no longer evaluates the test expression multiple
+ <option>CASE</> no longer evaluates the tested expression multiple
times. This has benefits when the expression is complex or is
volatile.
</para>
--
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