From b621efbbb89106db3e3e63009d152d6cae7dc39c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Date: Tue, 22 Nov 2005 15:31:23 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update wording and cleanup for new items.

---
 doc/FAQ              | 12 ++++++------
 doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html | 13 +++++++------
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/FAQ b/doc/FAQ
index faf7a59c93d..3afcbb33be8 100644
--- a/doc/FAQ
+++ b/doc/FAQ
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
                 Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for PostgreSQL
                                        
-   Last updated: Tue Nov 22 10:21:51 EST 2005
+   Last updated: Tue Nov 22 10:31:18 EST 2005
    
    Current maintainer: Bruce Momjian (pgman@candle.pha.pa.us)
    
@@ -212,8 +212,8 @@
           + Debugging information
           + Debugger backtrace output
      * The bug is new. The following might happen:
-          + A patch has been created and will be included in the next
-            major or minor release
+          + A patch is created and will be included in the next major or
+            minor release
           + The bug cannot be fixed immediately and is added to the TODO
             list
        
@@ -236,9 +236,9 @@
    efficient to respond directly to email and keep the TODO list
    up-to-date. In practice, bugs don't last very long in the software,
    and bugs that affect a large number of users are fixed rapidly. The
-   only single place to find all changes, improvements, and fixes in a
-   PostgreSQL release is to read our CVS logs messages. Even the release
-   notes do not contain every change made to the software.
+   only place to find all changes, improvements, and fixes in a
+   PostgreSQL release is to read the CVS log messages. Even the release
+   notes do not list every change made to the software.
    
   1.10) What documentation is available?
   
diff --git a/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html b/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html
index 634286dc829..8bf6153c789 100644
--- a/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html
+++ b/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
   alink="#0000ff">
     <H1>Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for PostgreSQL</H1>
 
-    <P>Last updated: Tue Nov 22 10:21:51 EST 2005</P>
+    <P>Last updated: Tue Nov 22 10:31:18 EST 2005</P>
 
     <P>Current maintainer: Bruce Momjian (<A href=
     "mailto:pgman@candle.pha.pa.us">pgman@candle.pha.pa.us</A>)
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@
     </li>
     <li>The bug is new.  The following might happen:
         <ul>
-	<li>A patch has been created and will be included in the next major 
+	<li>A patch is created and will be included in the next major 
 	or minor release</li>
 	<li>The bug cannot be fixed immediately and is added
 	to the <A href="http://www.postgresql.org/docs/faqs.TODO.html">TODO</A>
@@ -312,10 +312,11 @@
     <A href="http://www.postgresql.org/docs/faqs.TODO.html">TODO</A>
     list up-to-date. In practice, bugs don't last very long in the
     software, and bugs that affect a large number of users are fixed
-    rapidly. The only single place to find all changes, improvements,
-    and fixes in a PostgreSQL release is to read our CVS logs messages.
-    Even the release notes do not contain every change made to the
-    software.</P>
+    rapidly. The only place to find all changes, improvements, and
+    fixes in a PostgreSQL release is to read the
+    <a href="http://www.postgresql.org/developer/sourcecode/">CVS</a>
+    log messages.  Even the release notes do not list every change
+    made to the software.</P>
     
     <H3 id="item1.10">1.10) What documentation is available?</H3>
 
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