From a919fdfd3d22c51666d959aa3274a3f30fe1e496 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Date: Mon, 12 Jul 2004 01:37:01 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Wording improvement.
---
doc/FAQ | 10 +++++-----
doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html | 8 ++++----
2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/FAQ b/doc/FAQ
index 500ca5847dd..9497722030f 100644
--- a/doc/FAQ
+++ b/doc/FAQ
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for PostgreSQL
- Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:10:08 EDT 2004
+ Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:36:51 EDT 2004
Current maintainer: Bruce Momjian (pgman@candle.pha.pa.us)
@@ -641,10 +641,10 @@
all PC hardware is of equal quality. It is not. ECC RAM, SCSI, and
quality motherboards are more reliable and have better performance
than less expensive hardware. PostgreSQL will run on almost any
- hardware but, if you are building a server where reliability and
- performance are concerns, it is wise to research your hardware options
- thoroughly. Our email lists can be used to discuss hardware options
- and tradeoffs.
+ hardware, but if you are building a server where you are concerned
+ about reliability and performance it is wise to research your hardware
+ options thoroughly. Our email lists can be used to discuss hardware
+ options and tradeoffs.
_________________________________________________________________
Operational Questions
diff --git a/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html b/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html
index 400165be33f..d8021b67473 100644
--- a/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html
+++ b/doc/src/FAQ/FAQ.html
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
alink="#0000ff">
<H1>Frequently Asked Questions (FAQ) for PostgreSQL</H1>
- <P>Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:10:08 EDT 2004</P>
+ <P>Last updated: Sun Jul 11 21:36:51 EDT 2004</P>
<P>Current maintainer: Bruce Momjian (<A href=
"mailto:pgman@candle.pha.pa.us">pgman@candle.pha.pa.us</A>)<BR>
@@ -812,9 +812,9 @@
<P>Because PC hardware is mostly compatible, people tend to believe that
all PC hardware is of equal quality. It is not. ECC RAM, SCSI, and
quality motherboards are more reliable and have better performance than
- less expensive hardware. PostgreSQL will run on almost any hardware
- but, if you are building a server where reliability and performance are
- concerns, it is wise to research your hardware options thoroughly. Our
+ less expensive hardware. PostgreSQL will run on almost any hardware,
+ but if you are building a server where you are concerned about reliability
+ and performance it is wise to research your hardware options thoroughly. Our
email lists can be used to discuss hardware options and tradeoffs.</P>
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