From a16c2edcc7d54ae36dc8acec23201b1d2dfc34b0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Heikki Linnakangas <heikki.linnakangas@iki.fi>
Date: Sat, 25 Jan 2014 23:30:17 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Copy-editing docs for recovery_target='immediate', and "ie."
Phrase the sentence better. Also, spell "i.e." rather than "ie."
Thom Brown
---
doc/src/sgml/config.sgml | 2 +-
doc/src/sgml/recovery-config.sgml | 5 +++--
2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
index 3c4bb9becaa..be5b89a1121 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/config.sgml
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ include 'filename'
names that start with the <literal>.</literal> character are also excluded,
to prevent mistakes as they are hidden on some platforms. Multiple files
within an include directory are processed in file name order. The file names
- are ordered by C locale rules, ie. numbers before letters, and uppercase
+ are ordered by C locale rules, i.e. numbers before letters, and uppercase
letters before lowercase ones.
</para>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/recovery-config.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/recovery-config.sgml
index b818197299d..4a97bb7a9c4 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/recovery-config.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/recovery-config.sgml
@@ -216,8 +216,9 @@ restore_command = 'copy "C:\\server\\archivedir\\%f" "%p"' # Windows
<listitem>
<para>
This parameter specifies that recovery should end as soon as a
- consistency is reached, ie. as early as possible. When restoring from an
- online backup, this means the point where taking the backup ended.
+ consistent state is reached, i.e. as early as possible. When restoring
+ from an online backup, this means the point where taking the backup
+ ended.
</para>
<para>
Technically, this is a string parameter, but <literal>'immediate'</>
--
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