From 3e9a86a38d2564b840ac8783338620ee64fe6fc7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
Date: Sat, 15 Nov 2003 20:01:11 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] A little bit more copy-editing...
---
doc/src/sgml/release.sgml | 18 +++++++++---------
1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
index ff11045cdff..ea210768cca 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
<!--
-$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 petere Exp $
+$Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.242 2003/11/15 20:01:11 tgl Exp $
-->
<appendix id="release">
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ $Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 pe
<para>
Simple SQL functions can now be inlined by including their SQL
in the main query. This improves performance by eliminating
- per-call overhead. That means, simple SQL functions now
+ per-call overhead. That means simple SQL functions now
behave like macros.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ $Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 pe
<varlistentry>
<term>
- Make free space map to efficiently reuse empty index pages,
+ Make free space map efficiently reuse empty index pages,
and other free space management improvements
</term>
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ $Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 pe
<para>
In previous releases, B-tree index pages that were left empty
because of deleted rows could only be reused by rows with
- index values similar to the original rows indexed on that
+ index values similar to the rows originally indexed on that
page. In 7.4, <command>VACUUM</command> records empty index
pages and allows them to be reused for any future index rows.
</para>
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ $Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 pe
<varlistentry>
<term>
- Cursors conform more closely with the SQL standard
+ Cursors conform more closely to the SQL standard
</term>
<listitem>
@@ -199,7 +199,7 @@ $Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 pe
<listitem>
<para>
- These cursors are also called holdable cursors
+ These cursors are also called holdable cursors.
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ $Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 pe
release. Significant effort was invested to make the messages
more consistent and user-oriented. If your applications try to
detect different error conditions by parsing the error message,
- you are strongly encourage to use the new error code facility.
+ you are strongly encouraged to use the new error code facility instead.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -568,8 +568,8 @@ $Header: /cvsroot/pgsql/doc/src/sgml/release.sgml,v 1.241 2003/11/15 01:16:37 pe
<listitem>
<para>Improve GEQO optimizer performance (Tom)</para>
<para>
- There were several inefficiencies in the way the GEQO optimizer
- managed potential query paths. This release fixes this.
+ This release fixes several inefficiencies in the way the GEQO optimizer
+ manages potential query paths.
</para>
</listitem>
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